Webydo Space Jam

So far, this is how our Website looks for the revamp of SpaceJam. We have chosen to do a parallax scrolling.

Here is the critique that we received based on how our website is now compared to what we can do to improve it.

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The words “Space Jam” could be even bigger to fill more of the page. We’d like to see something else in the screen too when you see Space Jam, like the little rocket ship flying off the page.
The parallax movements don’t feel like they settle until you’re at the very top of the page, sometimes you have to even scroll until it’s partially off the screen for it to settle. We’d prefer to see it settle in the middle of the screen.
Navigation is really simple to understand.
It would be nice if there was a different way to signify links other than blue and underlined (Even though we know that was a technical problem)
The typeface for the paragraph is too condensed. There is so much space (haha pun) ← good one] on the screen that you could use a wider typeface that feels more open, similar to the typeface for “Jam Central”
Use of icons is really nice!!
Each section could be more uniform in color. We don’t think you need to entirely change color schemes between each section, or if you did the entire section could be the same color and the hierarchy in your text could come from size, font weight and negative space.
You could actually just fill the entire screen with the icon and the paragraph and heading from each section, don’t need so much negative space
Not sure if the stars at the top are a visual cue or just for decoration
You could color code the spaceship in your navigation to the spaceship on the screen, same with the flag and the satellite

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We plan to again work on possibly creating more space and visual representation, as well as fine tune the text, font size, and color.

Typography 2 - Emily Campagnola